MrBrainwasher

The use of 'I' at the beginning of almost every sentence, simply makes it look boring and dull. It's like you are obsessed with 'I'. You even used 'I' at ...

So for a five year old to go through that much pain just so she doesn’t get yelled at by the teacher can just make you realize how horrible my ...

Narration was awesome. You seemed cautious in writing, in present and in past. Infact you wrote both, in present and in past. I have little ambiguity over punctuations and in ...

Written beautifully! A slight touch of humour was felt, which is hard for the writers to bring into their writing. Your vocabulary seems farely strong and that's a plus point ...

You've got a serious grammar problem, since you're here, so that ain't a problem anymore. For a writer, imagination is the tool.I like the efforts you put into the imagination ...

It was really catching story. Love between Dorian and Ana is beautifully plotted. Your punctuation is perfect and grammar seems good throughout. You've given enough paragraphs to make it look ...

Very nicely written! I didn't know about Manila's situation, but I can certainly relate to that. My own country had been colonised for over 200 years by British. I wouldn't ...

This is really a beautiful story. A sister's efforts are beautifully plotted throughout the story. I would've loved it if kassah was my elder sister. Now my review All this ...

One have to look very closely to find the grammatical errors in this story. Now let's talk about the plot. Your plot is really weak, atleast I was bored reading ...

Message was very simple and beautiful.Little things in relationships make it worth it.You've explained enough uneasiness from both of them, that proves their insecurities. Now my review Shutting the b

I'm not going to review it on the basis of grammar.Because you are good at it. . . A really touching and a meaningfull story.Not so long,not so short. But ...

AMG, i must say your stories are really exciting.I think,we got same taste. I liked 'morality' too.But i didn't review it because that was my first day in YWS. NOW ...

"You look for anything else, whether it be the pattern on the carpet or the number tiles in each row and column on the ceiling or the day when your ...