Mr.Knightley

I never like reading poetry about something like this, because, for me, at the end of the day, this kind of stuff is absolutely pointless. I always think that, when ...

Hey there! :) Great, great work here. I absolutely loved it! While I read this, all I could think about was the movie Avatar, as it has a lot of ...

Hey, Blink! Great work on this one. I liked the story you told here, especially since it's something I would never think of myself. :P It's very dramatic, and paints ...

I disagree with Conrad, actually. I don't see your tone as demeaning, really, just kind of tired of the mistakes that you write about. You have a very short poem, ...

I really loved this poem, S.S. Rose. I especially like how every stanza was formatted the same, thus allowing me to focus more on the actual work. You have very ...

Hi, Kylan! I have to say I really loved reading this poem. The imagery you used to describe your setting made me laugh, especially things like "fleshy chandeliers." No matter ...

Well, I think you've written a terribly sad story, and it kind of distracted me at first. I used to have nightmares just like this about my own mother leaving ...

I'm a little confused about this poem. Is the noun "snow" used to describe something more abstract like despair, greed, or hate, or are you literally writing a poem about ...

I really loved this, Phantom. I agree with Moriah on the fact that you didn't come right out and say that she was playing the piano, but still made it ...

Hi starlit! I really enjoyed reading this poem. The words you used created images in my head, and I love it when the 'story' someone tries to tell is clear ...

Hi! I agree with Moriah that some color would be a pleasant addition to this poem. I'm not sure, but I think I've heard of this kind of poem before, ...

Hi, Lauren! I'm here to review your work! First off, let me say that this setting already has me interested. I like the idea of having wolf companions for humans ...

Hi! I'm here to review your work like you asked me to. First off, let me just say that you have a great writing style, and I already wish this ...

Well, I honestly can't think of anything to say that would be constructive in any way. For me, there was nothing wrong with it at all, and the nit-picking bug ...

:shock: Wow. This was amazing! I think this must be the best-written piece of work on YWS I've ever seen! It's like something a professional writer would come up with, ...