Mr.Knightley

Hey there! I'm here to review your poem! Let's get started. :) So first off, I like the general idea you had behind this. I personally would never think to ...

Hey there, Hannah! I'm here to review your poem! Let's get started. Okay, so my first impression was a good one, upon reading that first stanza, with cotton candy trees ...

Oh, man! I wish I could like a work more than once on here, because that was just wonderful. :D From start to end, you captivated me, and I don't ...

Wow, Dreamy! This is great stuff. I just wrote a religious poem, too, and I admire that you have as well, but in a different way. :) You've really brought ...

Hey there, ab5986! I'm here to review your haiku! :D The twilight comes now The sun's bathed in golden drops Until night takes them I think your first line is ...

I loved this. :D It's so comical and light-hearted, despite the narrator being so frustrated with the birds. It's like a breath of fresh air! :P I did think, though, ...

Wow, Pen. You've officially embarrassed me with your superior skill and awesomeness. Your imagery here is so clever, and the way you paired the Autumn things and more...I don't know...real ...

Hey there! I'm here to return a reviewing favor. :P First off, I agree with Sting that the first stanza is nice, although I'm not sure what you meant by ...

Here I am, as requested! I have to say, I really like reading stuff like this. I don't mind violence in fiction so the more gruesome the better for me, ...

I have to say, I'm a big fan of haiku's ever since we did them in fourth grade. I like how they are short, yet are meant to sum up ...

Hi, there, Flower Child! I'm here to review! :D First off, I agree with *writewatiwant* that your punctuation is very good! It was well placed, and not distracting, which can ...

Moriah said it all (again!). I do want to add, though, that you might want to expand on the story a tad. Why does she feel this way? What gave ...

Hello, fellow Minion! I think you have a loverly start, especially for your first poem. I most like the line with "as rare as ceramic dishes and half-digested food," because ...

I have to say, I think this is a *grumbles* beautiful poem (though I'm still at a loss for what it means :P). I agree with Conrad that you should ...

I agree with all these guys said before me, so instead I'll focus on what I enjoyed about your poem! I liked your use of vocabulary. It creates a very ...