Mr.Knightley

Hey! Nice poem. I rather liked it (bite me Kyll xD). It was fun and enjoyable, and I like that the subject matter was light for a change. I read ...

Hmm...I'm not sure I really get this. Well, I suppose I do get it, but maybe it just doesn't appeal to me. Do you care explaining your use of someone ...

Hey ancient! We meet again! =P I actually really like this! It's short, sweet, and to the point. I love the idea, too. My favorite things to write about are ...

I'm gonna agree with Kitty on this. The big block of text was kind of...meh. xD It really turns me off. It doesn't exactly inspire me to read what's there. ...

I'm going to expand a bit on what Snoink said. For me, this was complete sensory overload. There really was no end to the metaphoric or symbolic descriptions, and it ...

Hey Sassykat! I'm here to review. And I'll try and come up with something that Demeter didn't already point out. ;) Any nitpicks I had Demeter really handled quite nicely; ...

Hola Dreamy! :) I like this. It's short and sweet, and to the point. So...I guess my review is gonna be short, sweet, and to the point as well. :P ...

Hey Story Girl! Nice poem. :) I agree with Matt Bellamy; you use description and emotion well in this. For me there was a good balance of both. Some of ...

Hey Lily! Ok, so, first off, I really like the idea you have here. It's a really cool story, and I like that you've put it into a poem format ...

Hey Harshita! I'm here to review. :) First off, welcome to YWS! I see you're still relatively new here. So yeah, welcome! :D Back to your poem. I think it ...

Hey JayBe. I'm here to review. :) I really like your idea. I really, really do. Angels are one of my many areas of interest/expertise, and even if your character ...

Eeeeeep! Nutty! This was...I mean....just awesome. Really. I didn't know you were so good at writing! :D I might like this so much just because I know you extremely well ...

Hello, fellow Knight! Nice poem. :) Short and sweet; just the way I like it. You started off fairly strong, and ended even stronger, which is a great accomplishment. I ...

Hey Silent! Here to review as requested. =D So. I love how you made this work. The three things you chose really blended well together, and the idea was creative. ...

Hey Nightshade! I'm not really liking this. Sorry to be frank, but I can't help it. Nothing about it worked for me. Contrary to what Persephoneia said, I found your ...