Morticiansdaughter19

And im also really surprised that so many people dont get the batman reference to be honest! Like if you don't get a simple batman reference you probably shouldn't be ...

while reading the first few lines I didnt actually expect the ending! It was good I would have liked to see it extended a bit more. Like maybe giving hints ...

Really deep morbid feel to it that makes you want to read more than once! I think you did a good job and overall it was a good read! Keep ...

This had a really cute ending! It flowed really well the whole way through, and theres nothing really I can critic about it!

This had a really cute ending! It flowed really well the whole way through, and theres nothing really I can critic about it!

Thanks so much!! :)

Thanks so much for the review! :)

I totally agree many people are to hung up on punctuation to see the words and story behind the piece.

Thanks! It wasn't suppose to have a specific rhyming scheme just random spots here and there.

You are so welcome and thank you for reading it! :)

Thanks so much ill give this piece another look! :)

Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it! :)

Thanks so much! it was my first attempt at anything Shakespeare. I will probably rewrite it in the future. :)

In this poem I am saying that this love between two people have been criticized and though people looked down on it as wrong it has gotten stronger and the ...

Thanks so much :)