Morticiansdaughter19

"Too tired to sleep" that really caught my eye, I never knew someone could be too tired to sleep! ha. I actually really liked this poem it has great imagery. ...

That was really good! So many ups and downs! I feel like there is lost emotion in the characters. When I say that I mean I feel like there is ...

The shortest poem I have read on here, but it speaks volumes! You should expand on this put if you don't it is totally okay cause these two lines alone ...

I love how in the first poem their is a hidden message in every line, that you would not regularly see in poetry. " Phantom pain (I have nowhere to ...

That was extremely intense. "The pieces of my family buried underneath. I miss my family" I wasn't expecting this when I read the title, which is a good thing. Did ...

Well lets just start by saying its a good poem, but this is a review so I do have to point out some mistakes. "Don't you mistake us, with your ...

"from a distance, or the minds that couldn't ever know that their desolation was self-inflicted." that is an amazing line to end your poem! I really loved that. One part ...

This is great imagery, I can really see the setting of Vancouver after a rain shower. "A million pin sharp crystals line the sky." Brilliant that was a really nice ...

Very nice imagery, this would be a perfect poem for the holidays. "Fade" doesn't need to be capitalized, that kind of threw me off when I was reading it. along ...

The words after the commas dont need to be capatilized like " Their graves are unkempt, Their faces unknown." the second Their doesnt need to be capatilized. But other than ...

I couldn't really get into the rhythm of the poem, not to say its bad it is actually good. When I was reading I was hoping that there would be ...

This was quite interesting. The format especially caught my eye when I clicked onto your poem. I just suggest that you break up the poem so like: "Hydrogen mixed with ...

This is very compelling it makes me want to read more about this scarred footed princess! And with its short length it still tells a story where you can use ...

I think it's a very powerful message about society and how we are suppose to fit the status quo or face being "different". if we just try to accomplish being ...

The rhyme and rhymes were great! It has a interesting story behind it, I haven't seen many poems on here about children or any struggle involving a child. If the ...