Morrigun

Funnily enough, that one line you pointed out WAS supposed to be in two lines. Thank you for pointing it out! XD And Perhaps I will, I'm not the greatest ...

Thank you lots! And don't feel bad, you gave some great advice. :)

Thanks! Changes made. :P

Thank you for the kind words. :)

I'm gonna put a pin in this because I wanna review it but my brain is made of mashed potatoes and week-old gravy right now!

I was a little confused when you said there needs to be a poem after "her" , but I got what you meant and I fixed that. :D Yeah, I ...

THank you for your review! :3

Thanks a bunch!!!

I'm going to come back and review this but as Renee said below I have also been here. I was admitted to a hospital for this, I feel your pain ...

I wanted to say thanks again for that link, it helped me make some stanzas!

Thank you for your review!! :D That definitely is a part I wasn't quite satisfied with the way it sounded, but was one of the things I just needed to ...

Thank you for your review! I agree with you on the struggle in word flow, I haven't quite figured out how to make it fit exactly as I wanted. I ...

Thank you! I unfortunately can not tell you this wasn't written from some kind of experience, but I appreciate your concern. I am all right, though, for all intents and ...