Morrigan

Everything needs to be written about. Do not shy from subjects that make you uncomfortable. They make you uncomfortable for a reason, and you should discover why they make you ...

How so, dear?

Dear Cow, I was joking about the last one. Trying to make my harsh criticism a little less harsh. Love, Magpie

Just a short comment: The bible is not written by God, but by man guided by God. Men make mistakes and are not perfect. The bible is not perfect. I ...

Spark, Not only is this an excellent review, but I appreciate a Christian who can understand how much strength it takes to walk into an abortion clinic and have a ...

Hello! This poem is actually a narrative-- I am the person, and I am a girl. I think the question of the sin is answered; when I wrote this, (about ...

It is important to have pieces about suicide in today's literature. You, however, need to add context and watch your tone if you're going to write about it in this ...

If I don't understand, please explain it to me.

As I said, you could just take it out completely. You don't always need a rhyme scheme.

Hello, Rosey. I am not going to leave a review because this is beautiful, and the only things I would tell you to change would be tiny and inconsequential. I ...

Hi, Persy. As always, I'm here to shower praises upon you. an ampersand Yes. Thank you. Wonderful. He's an ampersand. Because he's the pause in a sentence. He is the ...

Hi again, niteowl! I like what you've added. It lends more emotion to the piece and illustrates that the narrator is a cat much more clearly than before. The one ...

Oh, look, you edited it before I put up my review. I like triumphs better. It's clearer.

Wow, thanks for looking at it again! (I could have sworn I took out that "sent" in front of messages. Gosh darn it.) You always give such lovely reviews.

Thanks. I'm so glad someone decided to help me with that line. I knew it wasn't great. I'll do something like that, definitely. :)