Morrigan

Thank you for your review! However, I will direct you to my favorite article on this site: . That capitalization rule you mentioned? It's not a rule at all. Happy ...

Nostalgia: This was the first piece I was horrified at when I joined the site.

whut

what

...what

I'm not going to review this. But you made a grave error. You're eyes are so lovely, "You're" is a contraction of the words "you" and "are". So you just ...

Thanks for explaining!

Oh, wow! I guess you're right! Thanks! But I think you missed the whole point of the poem!

Thanks for your well thought out reply! I wonder if all people who think this way have a similar way of articulating their ideas towards others! :D

Thank you so much!

With the disappearance, since it was intentional, I think perhaps you should make it transition into the middle of the poem a little more smoothly. Mention something about it, rather ...

I don't like this. It creeps me out. As Aley mentioned, the meter is off in spots. But really, who would think of taking a children's rhyme and twisting it ...

Well, lets look at the structure of the sentence. What is the thing that is giving the bubble life? Is it the lips or the breath? Let's see: "breath from ...

omg no! *blushes* (but really go for it lol)

The identification being "Danny: [text message here]" take out danny. Take out "D: All I want to do is jump." Omit means take out.