Morrigan

Hey man, you know I love you, so I'm not gonna bother with the whole "this is great but--" and I'm gonna just ramble on about whatever I see at ...

Hi there Rainy, and welcome to YWS! It's wonderful to have new faces around. This is a very serious topic, and one I can relate to. I think that your ...

Heyo Steggo All right so I totally dig some of the imagery that you're using here. You've got some really nice things going on that reel me into the world ...

Heyo, marmalade. I'm here to review your poem. Overall, I appreciate some of the imagery that you use, but at the same time, I feel like it almost gets too ...

Lol lemme tell you I've literally been working for 5 days Dude I really dig your jams. I especially like (and I'm a total nerd for liking this) the meter ...

Hi Lumibear

Hello Kazeybear! I'm dropping by to review your poem. I like that you choose to center your poem around imagery. Personally, I think that metaphor and imagery is one of ...

Scarli bbz! I'm here to give you a review! I really love some of the imagery that you're bringing to the table. You do a great job of bringing fantasy ...

Hello! I don't usually review short stories, but I figured I'd leave you my thoughts. For a short story, this is really short, but it also grabs the audience and ...

Heyo Marmalade, I've come to give you a review. I think you've got a really nice start to this poem. I like that you keep a theme through the poem, ...

Hello, ovrd0se! A belated welcome to YWS! I really liked some of your images. You obviously have some talent in that department. Some of them surprised me in a good ...

Hi Pompiepoo~ It's been a while! I'm obviously going to be rusty at reviewing, since I can't even remember the last time I left a review. But I'll tell you ...

Hey there, soundofmind! It's review day, and I've come to eat your poem! (did I say eat? I meant review). For a poem titled "there are no words," you've certainly ...

Hello, funkyeddie92! It's review day, and I've come to review your poem! I see that DrThomas has already reviewed the content of the poem, and I agree with everything she's ...

Hello, Kazeybear! It's review day, so I've come to review your poem. What follows is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. I like what you chose to write ...