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Hello, Quentin. I saw this earlier, but am now finally returning to review it. First of all, I quite enjoyed this. When I screamed that I hated beatniks in chat, ...

Hello, Gaki! Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here! I really enjoyed reading this. Though the meaning was unclear at first, I liked the imagery you used, and ...

Hi there, LynseyStaggs! Eeeh, this is so creepy! You did a really good job of keeping the tone light even though the subject matter was dark. That's what I like ...

Hello, PaperNessa! I enjoyed reading this because your imagery is beautiful, and you incorporate it into a cohesive unit smoothly. That being said, I do have a few suggestions for ...

Hello, LogicAndObjections. Here is my honest opinion. It's filled with good intentions. This poem is about taking things one at a time, yes? It doesn't practice what it preaches very ...

This is delightful and charming. I love the idea of the word eater. As I am not very experienced in the realm of fanfic, I do have a few questions ...

Hi there, Tay01! I noticed that you've been giving a lot of helpful reviews lately, so I decided to drop in and give you one! Here is my honest opinion. ...

Hi, Rhia. You say this is wordy, and I can see where you're coming from, but also I just want to tell you how beautiful this is. When people write ...

Oh, wow, Cow, this is quite a... thing, isn't it? To be honest, I don't know whether I like the actual poem itself or not, but I did chuckle at ...

Hi there, theironnovelist! This is just lovely. A poem about blowing bubbles. It made my heart happy! That being said, there are a few things I'd like to look more ...

Hello, Lakshmi, and welcome to YWS! You have lovely word choice in this poem, and I never really thought about dusk this way. I was rather enchanted by it, to ...

MOO YOU'RE ALIVE As always, it's a pleasure to read your poetry. I have gleaned that this poem is about a dog, or an animal that the narrator had very ...

Hi, Deanie. To be honest, this poem has some issues. I don't like to start things out that way, but it really does. On the poetry front, it wouldn't be ...

Because it is finals week, and I cannot sleep, I've come to review your poem. I really like this. The descriptions are lovely, and I think that the title of ...

Hello, FancyDragon! I've come to review! First of all, I really like the time progression you use: it makes it feel like it's happening right at this moment. Also, I ...