MoonlightAssassin

Hey there, As a person who used to have these problems (and still fights it from time to time), I can definitely relate to this. (Although no one died in ...

Kiicoh, Wow. Just wow. This was very beautiful - in a gory way. ;) I love how I could so vividly see what was happening and all that. I really ...

Hey, Alex! I've been meaning to check this out... I swear I have. Now, I could go on and on with excuses about getting behind on my writing schedule and ...

Hey there, Hawk! I'm really loving this story so far! I haven't found anything wrong that really jumps out at me yet. That being said, I did remember something when ...

GoaGreena, Ahh, that was beautiful. Gorey - but beautiful. I loved it to death. (Pun not intended.) Even though it's irrelevant to the review, I feel as if I should ...

Hey there, Hawk! I've been meaning to read this for a long time now but I'm just now getting around to it... Needless to say, I loved it! I didn't ...

Alex, Thanks for requesting a review! I'll try to do my best with it. :) The strides he took from the stairwell to the master bedroom were unconsciously quick and ...

jujubean05, Okay... Um... This is very confusing and seems kind of stiff. For the most part you did well with using description, but the text was very rigid to read. ...

cannoncomplex, Hello! I'm here to review as you requested. :) First off, let me tell you thank you for being my first request! Okay, anyway... I'll be quoting some things ...

Remrock, I only found a few errors here and there and I'll post them below along with solutions in red. Then we shall get to the actual review. ^_^ This ...

MilkNCookies, I like the beginning of this and I'd like to see where it goes... I found a few errors here and there which I've listed below with what you ...

MilkNCookies, Oh. My. God. This is genious and I love it - really, really love it. I love the ideas and the writing style and everything about it. Keep going ...

Hi, Mutant! I really, really like this story. The way it's told is just so ... breathtaking. And I actually like the fact that you didn't use capital letters. It ...

emoinpink, I completely suck at poetry, so you can ignore this if you wish ... but personally I think that this is really good. ^_^ I like the way that ...

Gheala, I just have a few critiques. First of all, Penguin is correct about what she said. Second, the 'n' in " 'not great.' " should be capitalized. And third, ...