MoonIris

Thanks for the review.

No need to apologize. I'll be glad to read your new version.

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review. I know the story is moving fast and I did that intentionally. Because it happens so fast, she doesn%u2019t have time to understand herself, and all ...

Thank you for the review. I answer the majority of your questions in the first chapter. Kaltaine knew about magic but never had contact with it. I explain more about ...

It%u2019s a series of three books that I read when I was younger. It%u2019s a nice story. By the way you have a lovely name.

I think you should slow down the action during this moment. That will bring atention to this moment and you can explaon better. You should take the time to explain ...

Thank you for the review! I'm glad u understood the Riptide reference :D

It was confusing how the character changes his opinion so quickly. We don't have the time to fully understand what happened before the fire starts.

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Now I saw the rhyme! I'm sorry that wasn't helpful.

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Thank you!!! :)

To be fair I'm not sure as it started at different times in every country.