MoonIris

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it!

Hi, Grav! Thank you for the review! I corrected the little mistake you pointed out. The poem is, based on a Peter Pan reference. When I was around 6, after ...

Hey! I really enjoy your poem. The feeling that I got from it was calm. My only question is were did you exactly picture it? In the first stanza I ...

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I didn't think of this but it makes sense. I agree the perspective can change with the person and it's really interesting!

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Hi, thank you for the review! Firstly,when I say "And those people, whose truth is all about don't want that to happen" it means that sometimes when others (for example ...

Hi, I really think this is a really good description. I think it actually could be a little bit scary to be watched by "sun-stricken eyes". I don't really know ...

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I think the writing is good. Maybe you used %u2018perhaps%u2019 one or two times to much. It%u2019s easy to read and had a great mix of vocabulary. You describe a ...

The poem was really nice it had a nice melody to it as well. I think you have great ideas and can’t wait to see what will bring day 2. ...

I really like the story! I think it’s great. Perhaps the way the seasons behave it’s the way we feel during them. The way you said (in a way or ...