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Re: The Stowaway and the General [2/3]
Hi Magebird, This is the first fanfiction that I read on YWS and I really like it. I'm a huge fan of Avatar TLA and that's probably why I chose ...
Jun 28, 2020 -
Re: Blame
Hi Gravitem. I think you wrote a really nice poem. I especially liked that it's so short. I don't know if this proverb is used in English but it's known ...
Jun 26, 2020 -
Re: A Chicken Story
Hi Awru, I really liked your story. It made me think of a book Animal Farm by George Orwell. It has similarities. Only in yours is just about chickens not ...
Jun 26, 2020 -
Re: The Wise Man of Haikus
Hey. This poem that you wrote is very interesting. I am a fan of Haikus. I have to admit when I read the title I thought there are going to ...
Jun 25, 2020 -
Re: Entry 3 - Heather
Hey! I think it's a really nice poem. I like how her description it's not very clear and probably that's also your memory of her. At the beginning, I thought ...
Jun 25, 2020 -
Re: log 1 - lany evergale.
Hi calmyindanger, First of all, I wanted to say that I like your story. I think it's interesting how it's written, in the first person. I have to agree with ...
Jun 24, 2020 -
Re: Messy depths of murky words
Hi watchamacallita, I really liked your poem.I thought it expresses the fillings of a writer in a beutifull way. Your poem had a nice flow and it made me think ...
Jun 23, 2020 -
Re: an unfinished ~social anxiety art~ I did that I kinda hate
Hi! I think it’s a lovely painting. I do have anxiety problems and for a long time I tried to ignore them. I always thought it was something wrong with ...
Jun 23, 2020 -
Re: new moon
Hi, StarlitMind. I am here with a short review. First of all, I wanted to say how creative the shape of the poem is. I was pleasantly surprised to discover ...
Jun 22, 2020 -
Re: 1
Hi AJW708, I hope you are doing great! The poem that you wrote is very nice. I like how the first two lines are also the last ones. It shows ...
Jun 22, 2020 -
Re: Pain As An Afterthought
Hi there! I hope you're doing great! I have to admit that you wrote a really nice poem. I think you describe a pain, a change that we are never ...
May 25, 2020 -
Re: Shadow Thoughts
Hi! First of all, I think that you wrote a really beautiful poem. I think you more or less wrote what depression is in a poetical way. I liked that ...
May 25, 2020 -
Re: .
Hi! I hope you're doing great. The poem is rather short so my review would be the same. I think you chose a beautiful topic and you wrote about it ...
May 24, 2020 -
Re: ...
Hi! The first thing is that I loved your story. It's really well written and your description is amazing. It really made me feel part of the story. The only ...
May 24, 2020 -
Re: matricide
Hi! I think you chose an important and interesting topic for the poem. It's really important that we take action against global warming. This is why I decided to review ...
May 24, 2020
