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  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Stowaway and the General [2/3]

    Hi Magebird, This is the first fanfiction that I read on YWS and I really like it. I'm a huge fan of Avatar TLA and that's probably why I chose ...

    Jun 28, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Blame

    Hi Gravitem. I think you wrote a really nice poem. I especially liked that it's so short. I don't know if this proverb is used in English but it's known ...

    Jun 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: A Chicken Story

    Hi Awru, I really liked your story. It made me think of a book Animal Farm by George Orwell. It has similarities. Only in yours is just about chickens not ...

    Jun 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: The Wise Man of Haikus

    Hey. This poem that you wrote is very interesting. I am a fan of Haikus. I have to admit when I read the title I thought there are going to ...

    Jun 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Entry 3 - Heather

    Hey! I think it's a really nice poem. I like how her description it's not very clear and probably that's also your memory of her. At the beginning, I thought ...

    Jun 25, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Horror Re: log 1 - lany evergale.

    Hi calmyindanger, First of all, I wanted to say that I like your story. I think it's interesting how it's written, in the first person. I have to agree with ...

    Jun 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: Messy depths of murky words

    Hi watchamacallita, I really liked your poem.I thought it expresses the fillings of a writer in a beutifull way. Your poem had a nice flow and it made me think ...

    Jun 23, 2020
  • Art » Horror, Other Re: an unfinished ~social anxiety art~ I did that I kinda hate

    Hi! I think it’s a lovely painting. I do have anxiety problems and for a long time I tried to ignore them. I always thought it was something wrong with ...

    Jun 23, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: new moon

    Hi, StarlitMind. I am here with a short review. First of all, I wanted to say how creative the shape of the poem is. I was pleasantly surprised to discover ...

    Jun 22, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: 1

    Hi AJW708, I hope you are doing great! The poem that you wrote is very nice. I like how the first two lines are also the last ones. It shows ...

    Jun 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Pain As An Afterthought

    Hi there! I hope you're doing great! I have to admit that you wrote a really nice poem. I think you describe a pain, a change that we are never ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Shadow Thoughts

    Hi! First of all, I think that you wrote a really beautiful poem. I think you more or less wrote what depression is in a poetical way. I liked that ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: .

    Hi! I hope you're doing great. The poem is rather short so my review would be the same. I think you chose a beautiful topic and you wrote about it ...

    May 24, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Science Fiction Re: ...

    Hi! The first thing is that I loved your story. It's really well written and your description is amazing. It really made me feel part of the story. The only ...

    May 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Science, Culture Re: matricide

    Hi! I think you chose an important and interesting topic for the poem. It's really important that we take action against global warming. This is why I decided to review ...

    May 24, 2020


I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
— Charles Perrault