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Re: At the playground. Short story
This story is a little gem. It's very subtle and sweet yet exposes some dark things about the characters. For instance, the girl is said to have cared about her ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: Untitled
This is a very interesting and creative story. I always though Death was one ma, a scary looking guy, someone no person ever wanted to encounter. I like ow you ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: Fireflies
This is such a quirky yet fun little story. This teenager, she's just on one thought and then to the next. Get ready for a rambly review! The tone in ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: (Help choose a name) Chapter 1
Oh god, this is just truly horrifying and bound to cause nightmares in even the bravest reader. You are very good at describing the scene and making the reader abhor ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: A Means of Writing Stupid Love Stories that Sell
I like this poem. My favorite line is: "It's funny how sadness sells", because that's very true about, well, pretty much everything nowadays. There always has to be something sad ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: Okstupid
This is a nice piece, however the entire time I read it, I was confused a lot about exactly who these characters, Albert and Ashley, were and what they looked ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: Gay Rights in Russia
This is a very nice essay, and a very good topic as well. It is very wellwritten and structured very nively. I like that you back up your arguments with ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Decisions
Brava, Iggy! This is great! I really liked this. Bonus points because I love this show and comic book series, and how you really got the whole vibe on point. ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Blurred lenses
This is a nice story. The description of things is so nicely written. You have a real knack for making the smallest things in the world seem beautiful. I also ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Health Is Wealth
Hello! I'll start off by saying I like the idea of this story. I like that you wrote about a modern-day problem that unfortunately many are choosing not adress. Your ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: My truth.
Very nice work, Winstonbeaudlaire! I was fascinated by how much love is shown for Matt. The writing style is very sincere, and it made me feel for you. I could ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Spooky Story
This is a cute and funny story and actually well-written. It suprisingly short and for something like this to happen, our world would be very doomed indeed-- at least for ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Red Falls
Wow, I really liked this story. It was very suspenseful and captivating read even though it's short. I wnderes what was wrong with the person telling the story. You got ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: The Sneeze
Oh my gosh, this work is hilarious! The description in it and punch lines reminded me of Mark Twain's writing. The way sneezing is describes made it sound so serious. ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: I'm Sorry
Hello MysteryMe! The format of this poem is intrguing; I did not expect to see it when I clicked the link! Because of the use of the font, I thought ...
Dec 27, 2013
