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Re: My body became binary code
Dear Retro, I'll call this a review, but in truth it's more my thoughts on your poem. Things to consider. I hope they're helpful to you! This will be a ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: The Astronaut
Hi Magpie! Just a very short and quick comment from me to assure you this is absolutely stunning; another great poem from yourself. I do want to review this but ...
May 18, 2014 -
Re: The Rite of Spring
Hello Magpie! Well I have to say, your poetry is such a pleasure to read. I've been busy writing my own for University/writing essays and such so I haven't gotten ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: Paradise Syndrome.
Hi Strange, Quick comment from me really. I wasn't sure if you realised it but you had actually begun to rhyme in this poem, before the structure was lost again. ...
Apr 3, 2014 -
Re: the absence of sound
Hi Confetti, I must admit, I do like this. It's well crafted and overall a rounded piece that only has a few issues, which I intend to go over quickly ...
Apr 3, 2014 -
Re: Benches
Hi Bellator, Thought I'd jump in with some comments for you. As this isn't REALLY a poem, I don't have much to comment on that. I'd rather call it a ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: starspots
Moo here, I'd love to review your poem. I hope I can do it justice. So, to begin... Line breaks Can I ask you a question? What is it that ...
Mar 27, 2014 -
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Hey there. :) I’ll start of this review with a few technical points, and then give my overall impression after I’ve done so. :P Love, as it turns out, is ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: The Grass is Greener on the Other Side
Hi there Briggs! I'll be going through this piece mostly generally by giving overall impressions and some feedback concerning the piece itself, rather than getting too deep into the nitty ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: [Post Deleted]
Hey Hayden, here as promised. :D I messed up the quote codes in this review, so excuse me for how messy it looks o-o There were not many people who ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: [Post Deleted]
Hey there Hayden, Moo here at your service with a review. Seeing as no one has really nitpicked this or pointed out some of the more obvious flaws, I'm going ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Freedom Is To Breathe
Hey there. I saw you were in desperate need of reviews, so I decided to help out. So I'll start with a general impression before I get down to the ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Blood on Hellibo (Part 1)
Hey there Yoda. Not a bad effort at all with this piece. I'm going to be more general with this review, rather than nitpick. Hopefully the others will pick up ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Vampire
Hey there. :D This is not Bram Stoker's Dracula and most definitely not Joss Wieden's Buffy The Vampire Slayer. This is a story of There's a couple of problems with ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: The Purple Shirted Annoyance
Hey Coral. I'm Moo, and I'll be reviewing this piece for you today. ;) I'll start with the good parts. There didn't seem to have many mistakes grammatically and I ...
Dec 9, 2010
