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  • Poetry » General, General Re: My body became binary code

    Dear Retro, I'll call this a review, but in truth it's more my thoughts on your poem. Things to consider. I hope they're helpful to you! This will be a ...

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Astronaut

    Hi Magpie! Just a very short and quick comment from me to assure you this is absolutely stunning; another great poem from yourself. I do want to review this but ...

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Rite of Spring

    Hello Magpie! Well I have to say, your poetry is such a pleasure to read. I've been busy writing my own for University/writing essays and such so I haven't gotten ...

    May 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Paradise Syndrome.

    Hi Strange, Quick comment from me really. I wasn't sure if you realised it but you had actually begun to rhyme in this poem, before the structure was lost again. ...

    Apr 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: the absence of sound

    Hi Confetti, I must admit, I do like this. It's well crafted and overall a rounded piece that only has a few issues, which I intend to go over quickly ...

    Apr 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Benches

    Hi Bellator, Thought I'd jump in with some comments for you. As this isn't REALLY a poem, I don't have much to comment on that. I'd rather call it a ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: starspots

    Moo here, I'd love to review your poem. I hope I can do it justice. So, to begin... Line breaks Can I ask you a question? What is it that ...

    Mar 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re:

    Hey there. :) I’ll start of this review with a few technical points, and then give my overall impression after I’ve done so. :P Love, as it turns out, is ...

    Nov 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Grass is Greener on the Other Side

    Hi there Briggs! I'll be going through this piece mostly generally by giving overall impressions and some feedback concerning the piece itself, rather than getting too deep into the nitty ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: [Post Deleted]

    Hey Hayden, here as promised. :D I messed up the quote codes in this review, so excuse me for how messy it looks o-o There were not many people who ...

    May 10, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: [Post Deleted]

    Hey there Hayden, Moo here at your service with a review. Seeing as no one has really nitpicked this or pointed out some of the more obvious flaws, I'm going ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Freedom Is To Breathe

    Hey there. I saw you were in desperate need of reviews, so I decided to help out. So I'll start with a general impression before I get down to the ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Blood on Hellibo (Part 1)

    Hey there Yoda. Not a bad effort at all with this piece. I'm going to be more general with this review, rather than nitpick. Hopefully the others will pick up ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Vampire

    Hey there. :D This is not Bram Stoker's Dracula and most definitely not Joss Wieden's Buffy The Vampire Slayer. This is a story of There's a couple of problems with ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Purple Shirted Annoyance

    Hey Coral. I'm Moo, and I'll be reviewing this piece for you today. ;) I'll start with the good parts. There didn't seem to have many mistakes grammatically and I ...

    Dec 9, 2010


I went to confront noisy neighbours, only to find the windows dark, stuck with two notes. The ghost, too, had "gone fishing". Something still whistled.
— Liminality