Monsters

Well to be fair you are stereotyping nerds, so when you say something in the article it can only be assumed that you are talking about all nerds and not ...

*not a review* Hehe, way to cater to the right crowd. I love how 'the nerd' has a negative connotation in society but if you break down the qualities of ...

It's a saying, it's used in many poems ect. Sadly, the worlds been copying itself for longer then it would like to admit.

okay wood, but interpretation is leaning on multiple what-if's when it should be clear cut because sparky is talking about what is going on in the story. This is an ...

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Awesome!

Yes and Audy it's cryptic because when you say no wallpaper and no hanging clocks it's kinda like telling us everything that you're not seeing instead of what you do ...

Obesity would be nice to tack on for the sake of FDA regulations on artificial sweeteners, gmo labeling ect. I couldn't get to all of the major problems and to ...

Oh yeah that, that's a lie. But oh well, I'd *snap* back but I don't think it works that way...

Yes but some is of future America and some is of current America. Also, I know of this argument and I understand your perspective but we hold different beliefs unfortunately. ...

It%u2019s understandable if you don%u2019t know what I%u2019m talking about in this poem as it contains complicated arguments and an understanding of American history. The poem centers around the idea

but Veer, I don't understand what this means...

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"you" go from talking to the ocean soul and then "you" start talking to the reader/yourself and then "I" get confused. Regardless of how right you think you are, you ...

Oh Veeren, don't you know the narrator is ALWAYS the writer. Get into character gosh darn it. The whole "lawns of the lost" thing is so weak it's almost dishonest ...