Young Writers Society

Nah, you are spot on. A constant pain point is capitals they can be distracting or enhance the flavor but it's too specific to a individual. In any case it ...

To be honest, I left for five years. It's extremely unsettling that you remember me HAHA. I do like the poem but we all have our styles and preference.

It's on a new level :-)

Hello, I've been wondering why the post seems so egotistical so thanks for pointing that out. I wanted to write casual like many of the popular blogs because acedemic writing ...

Thanks Morrigan. I agree, this is just a collections of some thoughts I have been having.

Welcome, have a good day

I don't understand; fragmented has nothing to do with glass?

You want a scientific explanation in a poem?

My point is more that you need to dive past hypothetical questions and support them with a critical analysis. Explore a hypothetical with ideas/rationality that dives past this common knowledge. ...

Here's another good quote %u201COnce you%u2019ve read too many trashy best-sellers, you begin to look for something with substance, something that attempts to define the universe.%u201D Jessica Zafra

Caterpickle: Most don't rewrite their poems after a review, it's more for gaining perspective. I talk about that more here; . Also, poopsie, Feel free to send a message next ...

Thank you, @PenguinAttack . To answer your question; "If I had left a period after "feet" do you think you'd feel differently about it?" You lack rhythm and clarity after ...

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Because you aren't satisfied and I am a nice guy here is a brand new review. Any more comments/arguments then message me, I won't argue or debate about reviewing styles ...

ok. I thought my suggested improvements were self explanatory. That is my error. Here you go: 1. proofread 2. try to be original 3. don't ramble iterating the same concepts ...

"to help writers improve" -dragonfphoenix You ask me to help writers improve and point fingers and add rules about how I am suppose to do that. I am helping. "Constructive ...