Moalex

Hi Pages! Thanks so much for your review! Just a heads up, the part where Cecilia speaks are indeed in Italics.

Hi Pages! Thank you so much for your feedback! It helps fuel my motivation to push myself to keep writing more!

Hi Holysocks! Thanks for the review! They are always appreciated, especially a running-thought one. I'm more interested in knowing if people actually liked reading my story than grammar. The reason ...

*Ah, I forgot to mention. This story is a prequel to another.

Hi Carlito! Thanks for the review and getting it out of the green room. I absolutely understand what you mean by expanding the moments, and separating the chapter to create ...

Hi Katja! Thank you for the review! Motivation springs to life when I read positive reviews, and I can't thank you enough for providing personal opinions and pointing out small ...

Oh right, just thought I'd let you know that chapter 2 won't be completed anytime soon. I am currently working on a prequel of this story regarding two of the ...

Thanks for the review Emilee!

Hi Dreamy! Thanks for the review! Will try to fix it up a bit more so that its more smoothed out. Particularly more on the "It's telling now showing," part. ...

Thank you!

Hi Tgirly! Thank you for the review Will make changes and adjustments accordingly to make the chapter better.

Hi Liberty! Thanks for the review, will make changes and adjustments to accordingly to make the chapter better.

Hi Alliyah! Thanks for the review! Will definitely take perspective and opinion into account and shift things up accordingly.

Hi Tgirly, thanks for the reviews and advice! Will definitely get started with changing things up.

Hi Panikos! Thanks for the review! One thing that I really want to point out is the confusion between Cecilia's personality. I understand it is really confusing, and unfortunately it's ...