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Moalex

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Angel tears- Chapter 6

    Hello, Moalex here to review. I am just hunting for points so I apologize for not reading your first five chapters. However I will try my best to understand your ...

    Apr 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Mavin's Ten Adventures Chapter 1 [Reworked]

    Hello! Moalex here, I definitely do not know you in real life because I did not share this website with you. However I do know the role playing game Anima ...

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Celestial: Spark of War; Chapter 3

    Hello, Moalex here to review your work. I did not read the previous two chapters to this. For obvious reasons, many people hunt for points and no reviews in the ...

    Mar 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Burning Home

    Hello, Moalex here to review your work. I must say the feels is strong in this one. I'm sure that I'm not the only one that may think that this ...

    Dec 19, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Quest of the Three Lambs-Chapter 2

    Hello, Moalex here to review your work. Sad to say that I did not read your last chapter, but I will try to review this the best as I can. ...

    Sep 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Tomorrow- Chapter Three

    Hello, Moalex here to review your work. I didn't read the first two chapters, I'm sorry about that. I couldn't find a chapter two though, I just found the an ...

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 13

    Hello! Moalex here to review your work. I must admit, I am very intrigued by your writing. I did not read the other 12 chapters you wrote, but this one ...

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Love Poem No. 4

    Hello, Moalex here to review your work. This poem sounds like you've experienced a one sided love. As if you were chasing after somebody and they never noticed your love ...

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Don't Speak: Chapter Five

    Hello, Moalex here to review your work. I'm going to have to say, there are a lot of nitpicking in here. A bunch of grammar errors, and summarization that could ...

    Aug 9, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Do You Ever Dream?

    Hello Moalex here to review your poem. I admit this is very creative. Very curious the way you structured your free verse. It goes well with what your poem claims. ...

    Jul 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 6: The Dome

    Hello, Moalex here to review your work. I'll tell you now, I was drawn in after looking at the genre of your story. I really love fantasy and action. I ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Exams

    Hi Deanie, Moalex here to review your poem. I admit, I really like your poem. At the start it sounded pretty serious. "but Father whipped her and pushed her out ...

    Jun 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Action / Adventure Re: The Acclaimed Chapter 1

    Hello Moalex here to review your work. This little short story seems rather deep, I feel as though this short story is telling me to notice what's true and false. ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Enchanted Fire-Spirit

    This was fairly entertaining for a good fifteen minutes. Though it's extremely predictable, literally a classical romance fairy tale. I think it'd be a whole lot better if you added ...

    May 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Game On Level 0.1

    Hello, Moalex reviewing work now. You most definitely have my interest. When I read the first few lines I had already imagined a horror story. Yet, as I continued reading, ...

    May 28, 2014


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