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Re: Angel tears- Chapter 6
Hello, Moalex here to review. I am just hunting for points so I apologize for not reading your first five chapters. However I will try my best to understand your ...
Apr 17, 2015 -
Re: Mavin's Ten Adventures Chapter 1 [Reworked]
Hello! Moalex here, I definitely do not know you in real life because I did not share this website with you. However I do know the role playing game Anima ...
Apr 16, 2015 -
Re: Celestial: Spark of War; Chapter 3
Hello, Moalex here to review your work. I did not read the previous two chapters to this. For obvious reasons, many people hunt for points and no reviews in the ...
Mar 17, 2015 -
Re: Burning Home
Hello, Moalex here to review your work. I must say the feels is strong in this one. I'm sure that I'm not the only one that may think that this ...
Dec 19, 2014 -
Re: Quest of the Three Lambs-Chapter 2
Hello, Moalex here to review your work. Sad to say that I did not read your last chapter, but I will try to review this the best as I can. ...
Sep 19, 2014 -
Re: Tomorrow- Chapter Three
Hello, Moalex here to review your work. I didn't read the first two chapters, I'm sorry about that. I couldn't find a chapter two though, I just found the an ...
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 13
Hello! Moalex here to review your work. I must admit, I am very intrigued by your writing. I did not read the other 12 chapters you wrote, but this one ...
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: Love Poem No. 4
Hello, Moalex here to review your work. This poem sounds like you've experienced a one sided love. As if you were chasing after somebody and they never noticed your love ...
Aug 19, 2014 -
Re: Don't Speak: Chapter Five
Hello, Moalex here to review your work. I'm going to have to say, there are a lot of nitpicking in here. A bunch of grammar errors, and summarization that could ...
Aug 9, 2014 -
Re: Do You Ever Dream?
Hello Moalex here to review your poem. I admit this is very creative. Very curious the way you structured your free verse. It goes well with what your poem claims. ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 6: The Dome
Hello, Moalex here to review your work. I'll tell you now, I was drawn in after looking at the genre of your story. I really love fantasy and action. I ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Exams
Hi Deanie, Moalex here to review your poem. I admit, I really like your poem. At the start it sounded pretty serious. "but Father whipped her and pushed her out ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: The Acclaimed Chapter 1
Hello Moalex here to review your work. This little short story seems rather deep, I feel as though this short story is telling me to notice what's true and false. ...
May 30, 2014 -
Re: The Enchanted Fire-Spirit
This was fairly entertaining for a good fifteen minutes. Though it's extremely predictable, literally a classical romance fairy tale. I think it'd be a whole lot better if you added ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: Game On Level 0.1
Hello, Moalex reviewing work now. You most definitely have my interest. When I read the first few lines I had already imagined a horror story. Yet, as I continued reading, ...
May 28, 2014
