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YAY Doctor Who!!!! Oh my word, you have made my life! I love this piece! I could really see almost all of the action with every line and stage direction! ...

Bhahahaha! I have not read many comedies on here but of the few I have read this banter is the best! I loved how you introduced it! I was a ...

Hello there, I will be your reviewer for the day. Morgan Davis at your service madam. First off, I really like the whole Frankenstein concept of your story here, the ...

When I first started reading this I was pretty sure it was in the wrong forum because it was so interesting! I like how you transitioned from the story to ...

Wow! I had no idea the world into which I was entering when I clicked on your title. Your story is quite fascinating! I was going to suggest at least ...

I think that this is a very terrific prologue! I liked all of the innocence and the curiosity floating in the air. I agree with dreaming the life on the ...

Dear Shakyll, I really love all of the changes you have made! They are stupendous! Now to start the official review. 1. I loved how you introduced Eldroned. He is ...

Hello there, oh dear I do hope you are not describing a situation that you have been through! This sounds absolutely horrid! It seems to me as though you are ...

Wow! That was beautiful! You grabbed my soul in just that little space. I know it was not a huge scene but I loved every second! I was a tad ...

Hey! I fully support MasterLHeart's review here. I do not like to have reviews focused only on spelling and grammar so I will only say put your story into Word ...

Hey there! I don't normally review poems, but I happen to like haikus! This was a great poem or rather string of poems. I loved how you strung it all ...

Wow! I was not expecting that until right after the comment about "I love you the most" and then it sort of clicked. That was a really moving story that ...

There was is nothing normal about our family. Instead of watching TV at night, we would would should go. stand on ladders and drop balloons filled with paint on top ...

This was very touching! I do not normally read short stories like this. I always get stuck in unfinished novels :( . This was very touching and had a sweet ...

This story pleases me! I cannot wait to read even more! Keep me updated please! The story line is revealing itself piece by piece and soon enough I will be ...