Mizzle

Double posted.

Eigth graders shouldn't be going through things like this; it seems every generation,the starting rate of corruption gets younger. God bless. ;)

Epic, Lily. :)

Well, I read most of this fairly well...without understanding it. You, Kylan, and your little inside jokes. =P Still, nice work. ~Mizz P.S. Did you tell Kylan about the twin ...

My opinion is that EVERY book is better than its movie. I've yet to be proven wrong. ;)

No problem. Have a good day, m'dear. :)

I think you double-posted this chapter. If you want to delete the other post so people will review this one, you can always contact a mod. ;)

Completely brilliant. :D

Oh. My. Google. You've made my day! :P

I can see how you don't think removing "to" in that line works, however it sounds much better to me, at least, if it is removed. Just my $0.02, though! ...

Oh my Google. XD. This is beautiful. Just beautiful. I have nothing to say except..."wow." Like, really. Wow. -Mizz

Hey, Olli. I sent you my edits PM-form...sorry for the length of the wait. Two days. Argh. But, nice work. :D -Mizz

Moksha, you're doing it again. Lack of understanding? Downgrading? We're trying to help you upgrade it, and I understand you thinking it can't get any better than it is, but, ...

I'm sorry, Moksha. You posted your poem, and therefore meant we would review, us YWSers. And we did, therefore giving you our opinion. Now, it is the writers (you) choice ...

Ooh. I'm a genius? Today's going better than I thought. XD. -Mizz P.S. Preschoolers are very smart these days. Beware. Of. The. Preschoolers. :O Bai!