Misty

wow brad. that's sort of how I wanted it, you're right... I wish I had written that poem! geez.... thanks for the crit you guys.

oh my gosh...oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh.... *tear* there aren't words this was just.... I don't even have any words. it was perfect. so perfect. no ...

brad I love you. you're terribly funny and egotistical at the same time. I loved this poem, and it IS your poem, and you can break the flow if it ...

I liked it, though the references to food were confusing

yeah. She quit the co-write so now I'm supposed to be working on it on my own but I haven't...although I should, our plot rocked. But oh well, can't win ...

if I ever finish writing this, you'll find out. it's supposed to be kinda vague. Thanks for the crit!

it's actually really amazing. I like it alot. but it's so sad...good job. :D I don't have crit, I like it as it is.

no, it wasn't that bad. I just never got around to reading it until now. And I liked it! nice repitition. I like repitition today. :D

thanks. means a lot. I should start writing again...

yeah I remember you. how is it going at tywc anyway? :D nice 2 see you again.

uhm...ty. I'll check your story out. I haven't worked on this in like, a month. I always kill stories like that.

you know you rock so quit putting yourself down. I have just about all of your poetry memorized and posted on my locker. It's beautiful. if i could write this ...

yeah, actually I thought it was quite original, especially for a poem. good job and I liked it. it's really sad. :( but it was pretty sweet.

oh, thanks. That's cool. doesn't mean much to me so I didn't think it mean anything to anyone else. sweet...:D

Yeah don't worry. I still write like that. I promise you'll get better at this, probably pretty quickly. Just keep trying, this poem really isn't all bad. :D