MissMiaFacinelli

"the purr of a porsche enginge" Enginge is spelled engine OK. Thanks for the crit, but I think you'll find that I spelt "engine" correctly and that you changed it ...

Please take my survey!!! Thanks x Pgsgirl x

Wow! OK, thanks Demi, I will try to work on that, but I have just started back at school so it's a little hectic at the moment!! Please keep all ...

Thanks for all the positive feedback guys x Keep reviewing!

Firstly, welcome to YWS!! OK Although I don't get this poem,it flows pretty OK. Just one thing. Punctuation! Remember a line break is not a pause, but a comma is. ...

Wow! I love how this progresses - it's cute ^^ Let me know how it goes with Mr Starbucks! Keep writing, I like your style! Pgsgirl x

Whoa. This is pretty gritty stuff. I hope your friend is OK x Pgsgirl x

OK So I love your style... it's totally me! It's intrinsically good, but don't overdo the ellipses, it's a little melodramatic and confusing. Apart from that, it's great! Keep writing! ...

WOW! I loved this poem!! The essence is fabulous, but I agree with the others... a spellchecker would be a good idea Keep writing - I like your style! Pgsgirl ...

PLEASE CAN SOMEONE WRITE A REVIEW OF THIS ?

Thanks for your comment. I now always use punctuation in my poems, if you don't believe me have a look at my "Friends and Enemies" poem! (find it here: I ...

Please read this poem and critique it. Is it better than my last poem?

Please keep critique-ing my work! It is all much appreciated!

Aw, cute. :) Crit now, thoughts later, yes? There are these two things called Alliteration and Assonance, and they're what give a poem a poetic feel. They're really awesome, and ...

Please, I need some more replies to this!