MissMiaFacinelli

Okay... This was strange yet quite good too! I thought the ending was very good: great twist! it was neither light nor dark, kind of a shade of grey, depending ...

Wow! A really cool poem! I loved this poem! I didn't mind about the format, as I like poetry, and don't really mind about how it looks :D One little ...

Wow. This poem was really emotional - I loved it! Just a couple of little things: make sure that you punctuate the end of each line, even if it's only ...

Wow! I really liked this poem: the rhyme scheme was really cool! Normally I don't really like A-A-A-B-B rhymes, but this one was balanced with just the right amount of ...

Wow. This is a really cool poem - great job!! Just one little thing - punctuation. Make sure you add a comma at the end of each line, to give ...

Wow. I really loved this piece!! It cracked me up so badly!! It's been so long since I read Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, I can barely remember it, ...

Wow. This is a really awesome, poignant poem! Just make sure that you punctuate the end of every line, to give your readers a chance to breathe! Try reading it ...

OK. I wasn't entirely sure what this was about until I got a couple of paragraphs in. It was grammatically correct, but a little repetitive. It reminds me a lot ...

Wow. I don't even like soccer that much - we call it football where I'm from - but this article was cool! It sounded really pro, great job! The formatting ...

Wow! I really liked this piece - it was totally my style!! I HATE being called Elizabeth - it drives me insane, but I will put up with it from ...

Well, I really liked this poem, but it looked a bit intimidating to me - three huge chunks of writing! :? Just one little point to pick up on - ...

OK. All in all, a good poem, but there's just one little thing! Make sure you capitalise the start of each line, unless the non-capitalisation is intentional, in which case ...

Wow. This was a really cool poem - I liked it a lot. Just one little thing - make sure you punctuate the end of each line to let your ...

Wow. I really liked the flow of this poem, and the topic - it was awesome. I can't find many faults, but make sure you capitalise the first letter of ...

Firstly, welcome to YWS! It's always great to see new members! I really liked your poem - it had a good ratio of rhymes to syllables, and flowed beautifully. Your ...