MissLyricz

Hey alliyah! :D Well, this was a very interesting read, my friend. ;) I liked the way you separated the different aspects of the mind in each stage of the ...

Hey, alliyah! MissLyricz here for another review! :D Well, I certainly enjoyed reading this one, for sure! I loved the way you described the different elements in the poem- they ...

Hey there, alliyah! I adore your name, by the way! :D I must say you have a very interesting vision as a poet. You're quite deep, but you have this ...

Hey there, rubykae! :D I really enjoyed your poem! I'd have to say it's one of my favourites that I have read on YWS so far- I truly mean that! ...

Hey there, 1998! MissLyricz has returned for yet another review with regards to your poetry, my friend! :D I enjoyed reading your poem. The confusion and in depth thought of ...

Hey there, 1998! :D Well, your poem is short, sweet and to the point! But despite the lack of words, there is a deeper meaning there that was easy to ...

Hey there, IDontKnowMaybeSo! Unusual but interesting name by the way! ;) I rather enjoyed reading your poem, my friend, it was very deep, intense and almost mysterious- it was surely ...

Well, you clearly have a way with story titles, my friend, because once again you have managed to lure me in to reading this story! ;) I must say, with ...

Well, first of all, your title is very intriguing. ;) I found myself very curious as to what the story was going to be about and I already had a ...

Hey there! :D Well I must say that this quite a good piece of writing for your first published work, my friend. Well done! I liked the way you described ...

I am always looking forward to the next chapter in this story, tigeraye, because first of all, you're a great writer and second of all, this is a great story! ...

Well, this chapter certainly brought some very intense and rather disturbing news about what happened to Ben and his medical condition- poor kid! This Mr Barnes does come across as ...

Well, it seems that your chapters are becoming shorter over time. Is it perhaps that you are running out of ideas for this story and, therefore, you're stringing out the ...

Once again, a very well-written chapter! I can't seem to expect anything less than wonderful writing pieces from you, tigeraye! I am rather fond of the developing friendship between Toby ...

Well, I must say, this chapter was certainly interesting! Despite the fact that you have mentioned that Melissa was a mean girl and apparently quite attractive, I was not expecting ...