MissLyricz

Hey there! :D Before I begin, I have to say that the title of this poem and the words you chose to lure in your readers was very affective- awesome ...

Hey there! :D It was surely a pleasure to read your story! It was unique, you took your readers straight into your fictional world and you wrote it in such ...

Hey restlessheart! :D I must say, I really enjoyed reading your poem, it was exceptional to read! I loved the way you have structured it, how every second line is ...

Hey tigeraye! ;) To be honest, I was not at all expecting another chapter for Heartbeat Academy. Considering its Review Day today, I went straight to the green room and ...

Hey Matthew! By the way, can I call you Matt? :D Anyway... Your poem was well written and I found it to be quite sad in a way. Though there ...

I felt a lot of anger in this rap, but I totally understand where the anger was coming from and why due to the unfortunate situation you were in at ...

Hey Matthew! :D I must say that you are an exceptional poet, you have amazing poetic writing skills, my friend, you really do! I absolutely loved this poem, and that's ...

Hey alliyah! I have returned for more reviews! ;) Your story was fun to read, it was not at all boring or disappointing and for that, I commend you for ...

Hey, Hope! I must say, that your story was very unique and intriguing, it was a pleasure to read! You should be very proud of your writing piece, my friend! ...

Hey there, ellmist! :D Before I begin, I must say that you have done an extraordinary job with composing this chapter! Awesome job, keep up the amazing work! PLOT: The ...

Hey MadWriter! :D Well, I must say that this was certainly an intriguing and fascinating prologue to your story. It was not at all the kind of event I was ...

Hey, so sorry that it took me a while to write a review for your new chapter as you have requested, I've been quite busy. But I'm here now! ;) ...

Hey Alliyah! I really enjoyed reading your poem, there was a lot of realism and I could easily that you came up with this idea from battleship as it was ...

Hey, Taylor! :D Wel, first of all, welcome to YWS, I hope you have a good experience as a member of this creative society! Second of all, I love your ...

Hey Ehtaniel! Well, I must say this chapter was a massive improvement compared to your last one. It feels as though the development of Louise is occurring as you write ...