MissGangamash

Hellooo! I thought you might like the action in this chapter, haha. I'll have a look over the Caius/Evie thing - but I think the wishy-washy thing is quite realistic ...

Hello again! I see your point about the police officers, I'll make sure they have backup when I edit. Thanks for pointing it out! They come condemning a murder of ...

Hello! And no problem, just glad you're sticking with it :) The conflict between Caius and Evie was superficially resolved but it is still resonating. You could see it a ...

I didn't get a notification for this review so sorry for the late reply, I've only just spotted it! Anna-lynn has been in the novel before, but it has been ...

Hello! Wow, very brave of you to tackle a chapter this far into a novel! Thank you for taking the time to read and review :) And yeah, most of ...

Oh my God, I had no idea I hadn't replied to this. I'm so sorry! I know I haven't been uploading because I've been writing other stuff and things in ...

This is a very sweet poem. It's quite sad but also lovely. I don't really know what else to say, only that I had to look up the word vellichor ...

I'll have a look over these chapters because I haven't for a while to proper look into your points. But the reason Evie and Caius' backstories are coming out of ...

I've edited Alexander's speech so that it is more obvious that it is practiced. He has told countless people the story before that's why he is able to describe it ...

Don't worry about offending me o seeming harsh! Can't be a writer without a thick skin haha. Everyone is entitled to their own opinion. I understand what you mean about ...

Hello! I'm glad you think things are fleshing out and I'll have a look over the suit thing. I don't know if it has already been mentioned but it definitely ...

Hello :) I feel the predictability that Caius will always come back to her is quite sweet? The connection did not come out of nowhere, it has been mentioned, just ...

Glad you like the two new characters :D Alexander's my fave

There's enough action to get you through haha. She's talking to herself to cover the silence. She's driving - basically alone - down a dark country road with absolutely no ...

Awh yay! I'm glad Caius is your fave. He's pretty great in my opinion haha. It's not his house, it's their house. They place they've lived together in for years ...