MissGangamash

Thanks for spotting the iffy sentences. Don't feel like you have to be critical to be helpful, you loving the story and feeling for the characters is also very useful ...

Oops. forgot to reply to this one. I like to try and pepper in some lighter tones and scenes so this novel isn't so bleak XD I'm glad you're enjoying ...

Silas adds another layer to the story :D Again, his relationship with Ezra is another that I've had fun writing. I try to bring a bit of the POV character's ...

Hey! Really glad this chapter is getting a lot of love because it's definitely different to the rest. But I wanted to show the humanity alongside the vampiriness. Plus, I ...

Fun fact - I used this chapter for one of my modules for my creative writing degree. I got a good mark for it! Yeah, this is where you get ...

Okay, thanks :D

Thanks for the review! Silas and Ezra's relationship is explored more as the story progresses. His training is a constant backdrop of everything he does so there is definitely more ...

sorry I never replied, I thought I had. Thanks for pointing out the mistakes!

Thanks for checking out this chapter! I like that you like Gabriel, and also that you don't like Ezra for valid reasons. Personally, Ezra is my favourite. His jealousy isn't ...

Sorry I've taken so long to reply, I thought I had! Ah, thanks for that clarification! My grandad had help with someone similar and we just always called her his ...

This is a prequel to a vampire novel I've already written so all the vampire terminology is fixed. Vampire-sprinted literally means sprinting like a vampire. It is later said that ...

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I get what you mean about Gabriel and Ezra's personalities. This is the first draft so I was still getting to know them ...

I have watched Good Omens! My second named is Crowley so anything with the demon Crowley in, I am there! (Yes I am also a massive fan of Supernatural XD)

I used this chapter for one of my uni assignments and even my tutor was invested in Lillian's pie XD I love that it's become a thing. Lillian's baked good ...

Thanks for the review! I've been looking up lasagne vs. lasagna and I'm getting so confused. Lasagna is even coming up with a red line under it. Some say it's ...