MissGangamash

Love this! Love Medusa! Love how you made me sympathise with her! So sad that she was cursed even though it wasn't her fault. Why do they always blame with ...

I'm reviewing as I'm reading so bear with me... - 'His eyes darted nervously, which, although common for agents delivering messages from Mr. Stream, was not his personality.' That doesn't ...

How can you be disappointed with World of Warcraft?! Tut. Tut. Tut. I can totally relate to this piece. It happened to me...while playing WoW! Not a fun experience I ...

After reading other reviews, I've noticed other people were also confused with the age of the characters. The way Victor speaks doesn't sound like how a child would speak. I ...

OOOoooh, it's getting interesting! Is the doctor guy going to torture him? :O I am still loving Fin's character and his feelings towards Ash. It just shows how deeply in ...

What happened to Tristan was so brutal D: The simplicity of the accident made it very real. 'And then Tristan was gone', again, I like the bluntness of it. It ...

Another great chapter! I love the mystery surrounding Fin. So there was an accident? I wonder what it was and if it had anything to do with what is happening ...

Oooh the plot is starting to thicken. I wonder what the guy wanted? And who did he want? Just Dannel or all of them? I feel like the exchanges between ...

I like where this story is going. The way that the scenery constantly changes is rather unnerving but the way that John seems unfazed adds to the notion that he ...

I enjoy things that involve dreams and the mind so I found this very interesting. Not that much happened in this chapter but I'm guessing this was just the foundation ...

I was also rather surprised at the fantasy element even though I read the chapter summary haha. It just like 'Daniel's having a swim and ooh look, an imp.' Not ...

Still got me hooked! Very intrigued as to what is so special about Fin. If he healed he some type of super enhanced human or something? Maybe when he finds ...

Holy cow, this was AMAZING! I loved it! I totally wasn't expecting that twist! I was like, 'awwh this is so sweet' then BAM! :O I thought the way you ...

I liked the simplicity of this. It made me feel sorry for Alice. Love can suck sometimes and it was sad that she referred to it as a 'disease'. But ...

This is a very interesting piece. I love dystopian fiction and I would like to know where this story goes. I could sense her confusion throughout this chapter and I'm ...