MissGangamash

I liked this poem and I'm not a poetry lover. The imagery you used it great and I like the subject. I'm into dark stuff haha XD And the message ...

I totally agree with you on this, that's why I absolutely loved Frozen (I haven't seen Brave). Also Maleficent is another great movie that shows girls that you don't have ...

This has me very intrigued. I find things about mental conditions very interesting and the fact that the narrator suffers from one got me hooked from the start. I like ...

I enjoyed this a lot. It's a good start to a story and has me very intrigued about the main character. What I'm not so fond about is the way ...

Commenting as I read... First, who's Abby? Did you mean Ashley?? 'Everyone had stopped talking and was looking at his expectantly' - 'him' instead of 'his'. Overall, good chapter but ...

Wow, this chapter had excellent pacing! I couldn't take my eyes off the screen after she got the hammer to the skull. You've created a very interesting and intriguing story. ...

Finally he's going to get some answers! Haha, I feel so sorry for the guy running around like a headless chicken. I hope Chase is nice and not going to ...

This was a good read. But I agree with haylstormsx about the first line. It doesn't really draw you in and is pretty cliché. The voice for the prologue is ...

Oooooh, very creepy indeed! This was great. I was never really much of a poetry lover but this website has a lot of excellent pieces :D I can almost hear ...

I'm a sucker for a dark story so that's why your little disclaimer drew me in...but I felt like there was a lack of depth in this piece. Who was ...

I really enjoyed this. The pacing is great. The short, quick sentences are like the sharp breaths you take when you run, which links to the theme of the poem ...

I really enjoyed this. It was a great prologue to draw you in. I've not been much of a werewolf person because I feel they are very rarely done well ...

First of all, I love this :) Your writing style is great and flows really well. You're characterisation and setting is wonderful. I could totally picture everything that was going ...

This is a wonderful start. Your writing style is superb. I like how you described the setting as Trako moved around and not just info-dumping. There was no description of ...

I love how a simple thing like that can brighten up a day, haha. Happens to me all the time. This was a very sweet piece. Simple but effective. I ...