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MissDevonshire

  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: One sided love

    Thank you for the review! I%u2019ll defenetely try to add some more lenght and I and I am considering writing another sentence but I just have to make it sound ...

    Jun 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: One sided love

    Thank you for you review! I don%u2019t find your feedback to harsh. As I matter of fact I loved how detailed it is and it is very helpful. Thanks for ...

    Jun 12, 2019
  • Script » General, General Re: I wish I wasn’t, I wish I was. I wish it didn’t, I wish it did.

    To begin with I really like the title of the poem. It's quiet long and simple in a way but I love the using of repitition. The title also suits ...

    Jun 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Heartbreak; a question of how. Not if.

    Thank you for the feedback! I really liked that you rewieved line by line because that made it easier for me to see and probably use your advice. I really ...

    May 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Heartbreak; a question of how. Not if.

    Thank you%u2764%uFE0F Your words make me very glad and I%u2019ll try to make this longer someday! Have a nice day!

    May 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Heartbreak; a question of how. Not if.

    Thank you very much! This review made me very happy and encouraged to dare to publish more on here. About the lenght, I will defenety think of making it longer ...

    May 26, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Heartbreak; a question of how. Not if.

    Thank you for the feedback! I am very new to writing poems, especially in english so constructive input is very useful to me. I absolutely don't say that in a ...

    May 26, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Historical Fiction Re: the london plauage

    Don't say sorry! I am sure it will be great!

    May 10, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Denouncing You

    Your welcome! I%u2019d be glad to check out your other work.

    May 4, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Denouncing You

    Have you written poems for a long time or is it a relatively new interest? Just wondering because I think you are very talented :)

    May 3, 2019


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