MissAtomicBomb

well, first off, you are a very strong person if you have to deal with asthma attacks. As a young girl, I suffered from asthma and unfortunately I took the ...

I like this a lot.... Frankly I am a romance addict and sometimes, though it may be a little cheesy, gushy love stories are the best. Though, I have to ...

Okay so I will not mess with the petty grammar mistakes that were made in this chapter, considering they didn't take away from the story all that much. It was ...

This piece isn't like most I've seen. It is a real, raw experience and it engulfs the reader in the actual scene. The descriptions are very good as well. My ...

You're short description of the story was indeed accurate. I went in trying not to expect something, and I was still surprised at the end. Your transition was so beautiful. ...

You seriously hit the nail on the head with this one. This should be published in a book about trying to heal yourself. This poem made me feel happy and ...

Man, the contrast, the contrast! That's what makes this poem. I personally enjoy contrast because sometimes you can't explain something properly without knowing how not to explain it. A perfect ...

haha geezes...This poem made me feel rather peculiar. Sad, but at the same time hopeful. Maybe that is because of my relation to this poem? I felt the character's pain...and ...

Wow... This poem is very moving. It describes the playfulness of death very well and how quickly it comes. It comes without us even realizing what is happening. "My head ...

I think this poem is pretty sweet. I don't mean sweet like sugar, but like a nice, gentle sweet similar to honey in tea. I especially the contrast inside of ...