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Re: Unobserved
Yeah I can't wait to read another! It lured me in and now i am hungry for more! Cool, avvie btw ;) it KICKS ASS :P okay Lame lol
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Betrayer Betrayed
It really HIT HOME with me I have felt betrayed by many people i trust and love'd' You have a unique sense of Knowing about you and you're just 15? ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: [Deleted]
Possibilities are endless Left to us to explore To find whats behind Each closed and open door Only there's not enough time To find what's in life's core These are ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Mahatma's Grief
As I read it I felt empathy for their plight you Did an awesome Job hopefully others won't be offended Not that i think they will but you never really ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Slamming Doors and Broken Hearts
Slamming Doors and broken hearts Pounded pillows torn apart Hate and words, no understanding All the while calm silence reigns Oh yeah I understand this all to well Believe me! ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: I hate my poems
Ironic yes Kak(shit) NO! Someday I’ll stop, And save us the pain. Myself the humiliation, And your soul the drain. I enjoyed the Pun you So obviously conveyed here Lol ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Love
aah well I got lost a bit But the end was nice My Love My Light Now that is truly Beautiful Overall i think you did a good job But ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Suicide Song
Well for an almost "EMO" like theme i think it was really good particularly liked the phrases you used is this Supposed to be a song? it has a catchy ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: The Bad Things
The Bad Things drove me out of the covers, along with my pregnant bladder, to the hallway; sour and unwelcoming. Night’s Breath He he You are only 13 How could ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: The Book of Shadows-Prologue
MORE! I read it through Now write more to it! finish the story Please! Great job! there are some flaws but I hardly noticed them as I was completely Drawn ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Nectar of the Gods
Great Greek Myth Coming to life again! Eros and Psyche is my all time Favourite Greek myth "The God of Love and the Goddess of Soul were wed. And they ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: A Face by Many Names
Wow Again you Captured my Attention And especially since it concerns Religion I am A Christian but this poem makes sense to me on so many levels I always try ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Tomorrow...
Utterly Beautiful! What can I say to really give it any Justice? i like The poem Then the Story afterwards You truly Know what To say I hope to one ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: For Bee
Ooh wow Okay so I Have to Review others posts So I was told as a Golden rule anyway after reading your title "for Bee" i thought it was going ...
Oct 17, 2008
