MiriamHannah

Aah I didn't realise it wasn't already in italics, thanks! I'll see if I can sort out ay mistakes. Please keep reviewing people!

I've never seen anything you've written thats better than this. Heart felt, amazing. Nothing else to say. lol

Ah. Ok. Well, lonely i find is more of a state of mind than an actual truth. You can be in a room filled with people and still be lonely. ...

Thankyou so much for the review, I am taking this stuff on, I'm just so busy (another excuse) I can't properly adapt them. I'm struggling a lot with chapter 10, ...

Thankyou so much for the reviews, I really enjoy reading them, even with critisism it helps me learn. I wrote this very quickly and when I was not in the ...

Hi, I write like this piece because of its sense of reality. The fact that you are looking over and reviewing your life shows a good quality both in the ...

Sorry, I am trying to look over everything and review. I'll have more time when our holidays finally break out (not that that is any excuse). I'm slowly improving things ...

Thank you so much for the review, I didn't notice the punctuation, thanks for pointing it out. I've righted a bit of it.

Ok, I accidentally put on the wrong part. I have been going through everything so thoroughly that I ended up writing a bit of chapter 8 as chapter 7. Will ...

Couldn't find one mistake, darn, your going to have to employ someone with a bigger magnifying glass. Perfect in every way. Love how your plot is developing and the way ...

Thank you so much for your comments, please keep them coming, I am still adapting this, I write it in about 5 minutes one morning before school so I know ...

This is really good, I like it. Not really fitting to the character so far, but also the link doesn't work so I can't see if the rest fits up ...

Can I say how much I agree with Emma Jane, please, please, please post the next chapter, even if its only in first draft. PM me when you do. Miriam

OK, I think the person before me got all of the mistakes, but this wasn't written with spelling mistakes in mind. You got the feeling across, you told the story ...

Are you going to continue with this idea?