Mirfain26

Hello! How are you? Mirfain here for a review! Ok, so the first thing I noticed is that there are quite a couple of grammar and spelling mistakes, so be ...

Hiya! So I saw you follow me and post on my wall, so I decided to check out your writing! Now then, when I saw "Mirror" and its description in ...

This was a little confusing. It was hard to understand exactly what was going on. I got that someone was fighting because of all the blood, but I couldn't really ...

The descriptions are very vivid and makes it easier to connect with the writing. I like your use of metaphors and I think you paint the picture quite well! Maybe ...

This was great! I can complete relate to this poem and I'm able to connect with it on an emotional level. To be honest, the flow of the words was ...

As confusing as it was, which makes sense since it's a dream, I found it very interesting. You have a great writing style with vivid word use in which I ...