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Re: royal nightmares book 1: the rememberance
Hello! How are you? Mirfain here for a review! Ok, so the first thing I noticed is that there are quite a couple of grammar and spelling mistakes, so be ...
Feb 10, 2014 -
Re: Mirror
Hiya! So I saw you follow me and post on my wall, so I decided to check out your writing! Now then, when I saw "Mirror" and its description in ...
Feb 9, 2014 -
Re: California Dreamin'
This was a little confusing. It was hard to understand exactly what was going on. I got that someone was fighting because of all the blood, but I couldn't really ...
Feb 9, 2014 -
Re: No new messages
The descriptions are very vivid and makes it easier to connect with the writing. I like your use of metaphors and I think you paint the picture quite well! Maybe ...
Feb 8, 2014 -
Re: Once is Never Enough
This was great! I can complete relate to this poem and I'm able to connect with it on an emotional level. To be honest, the flow of the words was ...
Feb 8, 2014 -
Re: The Nightmare
As confusing as it was, which makes sense since it's a dream, I found it very interesting. You have a great writing style with vivid word use in which I ...
Feb 8, 2014