Miraculor77

I just put the description of the hair to help the reader imagine the setting, and the fact that the girl has dark hair and gray eyes does relate to ...

I'm taking Algebra too! ^^ I liked the equations in Pre-Algebra best because I found them easy (idk if you can tell, but I really like math). Honestly though, I ...

I went back and edited the chapter. You know, this is the second review that said that %u201CKyre%u201Dwas positioned strangely, so I went back and smoothed it out. Thanks for ...

Thanks for the review! Your questions will be answered (I think) in later chapters.

OML you're right! I went back and fixed it, so it should look better now.

Thanks for the review! Honestly, I don't know if the words are on the screen, or if they are invisible. I guess it works both ways.

Thanks for your review! The next chapter is out, if you want to read it. :D

This is a really unique story, very interesting to read. You're taking Pre-Algebra?

Actually, I went back and removed the sentence entirely, because it was unnecessary.

Hi!! Thanks so much for reading my novel so far. I'm just gonna go ahead and say this here: The next chapter isn't very light-hearted. I finished the draft and ...

Thanks for the review! Ashe seems shy because she is tired, cold, and in a place she's never been in, or remembers being in. She isn't usually like this. You'll ...

No, it's supposed to be "desperat." It comes from the Latin word for "to despair, give up hope." That's why it's italicized. The reason I have bits and pieces of ...

Thanks for the review! I went back and fixed the little spelling mistake, so I hope it looks better now. :)

Hey to you too! Yes, I'm doing well on the side of the planet I'm currently residing in. :) I really didn't know that Lunae was a band (I searched ...

Hi! Sorry it took me a while to get back to your review. Summer vacation started, and I no longer have my Chromebook. I went back and fixed the chapter, ...