Miraculor77

You have a very good point. There are whole paragraphs in the chapter that are just telling. I'll keep most of the info, but try to show it rather than ...

Many of those questions are answered as the story goes on, but I should probably put some more detail about how the computer worked. And yes, the attack was on ...

Thanks for the review! I did feel that the second part was a bit short, but I wasn't sure if I should continue it because I couldn't find a good ...

I know, but I made a repeated comment and someone, (maybe an admin?) deleted it for me. I don't think it is possible to delete comments by yourself.

This is a repeated comment, so can someone delete it? @Zrillis, thanks for the review. :D

Hi! I haven't read any of the previous chapters, so I'm afraid I cannot offer any feedback on the plot. And as Ventomology (below) focused on that, I'll be focusing ...

School, why must you do this to us?

Good point. I have my own headache right now... :(

Hi! Thanks for the review, I was starting to get a little worried because there had been no feedback for four days. :) I took out the word "still" from ...

I just put the description of the hair to help the reader imagine the setting, and the fact that the girl has dark hair and gray eyes does relate to ...

I'm taking Algebra too! ^^ I liked the equations in Pre-Algebra best because I found them easy (idk if you can tell, but I really like math). Honestly though, I ...

I went back and edited the chapter. You know, this is the second review that said that %u201CKyre%u201Dwas positioned strangely, so I went back and smoothed it out. Thanks for ...

Thanks for the review! Your questions will be answered (I think) in later chapters.

OML you're right! I went back and fixed it, so it should look better now.

Thanks for the review! Honestly, I don't know if the words are on the screen, or if they are invisible. I guess it works both ways.