Miraculor77

Thanks for your review! The next chapter is out, if you want to read it. :D

This is a really unique story, very interesting to read. You're taking Pre-Algebra?

Actually, I went back and removed the sentence entirely, because it was unnecessary.

Hi!! Thanks so much for reading my novel so far. I'm just gonna go ahead and say this here: The next chapter isn't very light-hearted. I finished the draft and ...

Thanks for the review! Ashe seems shy because she is tired, cold, and in a place she's never been in, or remembers being in. She isn't usually like this. You'll ...

No, it's supposed to be "desperat." It comes from the Latin word for "to despair, give up hope." That's why it's italicized. The reason I have bits and pieces of ...

Thanks for the review! I went back and fixed the little spelling mistake, so I hope it looks better now. :)

Hey to you too! Yes, I'm doing well on the side of the planet I'm currently residing in. :) I really didn't know that Lunae was a band (I searched ...

Hi! Sorry it took me a while to get back to your review. Summer vacation started, and I no longer have my Chromebook. I went back and fixed the chapter, ...

Thanks for the review! I have one note to make before answering the many parts of your comment: Kyre is a guy, not a girl. I just noticed that you ...

Also, yes. It is in Kyre's POV. I'm working on it right now. It's nice that there are people who actually want to read my story. :) Honestly, it's my ...

Thanks for the review! I kept the sentences short on purpose; I wanted to keep the chapter succinct and keep the suspense. ^^

I just realized... Your username: Toboldlygo Is it the words "to boldly go" turned into one word?

Hey! It's good to see you here again. For your first suggestion, I felt that keeping the two sentences in one paragraph would make it seem more connected. About not ...

I really am debating over whether to label that section as a flashback or to not. You see, the review below this one said that the flashback was hard to ...