Miraculor77

Thanks for the review! I have one note to make before answering the many parts of your comment: Kyre is a guy, not a girl. I just noticed that you ...

Also, yes. It is in Kyre's POV. I'm working on it right now. It's nice that there are people who actually want to read my story. :) Honestly, it's my ...

Thanks for the review! I kept the sentences short on purpose; I wanted to keep the chapter succinct and keep the suspense. ^^

I just realized... Your username: Toboldlygo Is it the words "to boldly go" turned into one word?

Hey! It's good to see you here again. For your first suggestion, I felt that keeping the two sentences in one paragraph would make it seem more connected. About not ...

I really am debating over whether to label that section as a flashback or to not. You see, the review below this one said that the flashback was hard to ...

Thanks for the review. Now to answer its different parts: About the portfolio, I'd put all the chapters in a folder dedicated to Code: Delete , but for some reason, ...

That last stanza hit hard. I was immediately reminded of the book All the Bright Places by Jennifer Niven. Have you read it? I really didn't realize what this poem ...

Yeah, I thought the chapter was a little bland in terms of events. I guess I just needed someone to point out where. I'll go back and make it a ...

Yeah, I switch tenses often in this chapter. This is because I wanted to incorporate parts of her backstory without making separate flashback sections. Thanks for the review!

Um. Hello. I just wanted to point out to you... not to be rude or anything... You spelled "great" wrong every time in your review. It's "great," not "grate."

This is good! It's been a while since I read poetry, so thanks for writing this. Keep writing, Mira

Oh! I just realized... I commented twice by accident. Sorry.

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Woah! This is a very good story, so you don't have much to worry about when it comes to presenting this in your class. Because it is really good, I'm ...

Hey Anma! No, I don't mind you shortening my name. About Ashe thinking in italics, I tried to italicize the actual thoughts. Example: You spoke too soon. The rest just ...