Mira

Wow! This is absolutely wonderful. :) I honestly can't see anything wrong with this. It's written very nicely and I like the story that it tells. Great imagery as well. ...

This is really beautiful. :)

I'd critique, but it seems as if everyone else has gotten to it already. I'm still in love with it, seeing as I totally felt the same way when I ...

Thank you, thank you. :lol: I totally wrote it just a few minutes. And, Syte, it is supposed to be terrible. ;)

Thanks for the critiques and comments everyone! I edited the parts mentioned, so I hope it's a little better now. Still, I know it isn't completely perfect... Thanks again! You ...

I love the Twilight series, but I have to admit that was amazingly hilarious! Bravo!

Thanks everyone for your reviews! I did my best on editing this, but I'll make sure my future additions are more to your liking... at least I'll try . :) ...

Aw, thanks, Meadow! You're too kind. ^-^ I try to keep happy moods in my pieces, though sometimes I'll have to. Because, as everyone knows, smiling makes the world go ...

Thanks all! ^-^ I see my mistakes... And I can't believe I went back into past tense. This is my first time trying present tense, so it's a bit awkward ...

Thanks! I'll make sure to get right onto that and I'll definitely PM you if I add more. I really appreciate the help. Aah! I can't believe I went into ...