MindYourHead

Hello ZaddieCaso! I must say, first of all, that I really enjoyed reading this! Usually when I see a poem named pain, I expect it to be especially pessimistic, however ...

Hello qgadhia! Today I shall review your poem. So, to begin with, I would like to say that I quite enjoyed this piece of work. But I believe I have ...

Hello roon, fancy seeing you here ^^! I'm going to jump straight in to a review now, so here goes. The first thing that I spotted was this: An aching ...

Hello, again! So, I am going to write a proper review this time, honest! Righty, here goes: Poser I agree with octocoffee that “howl” doesn’t quite fit, I think “moan” ...

Hello roon! And wow, deep stuff. So, this is what I understand from this poem (personal perception): At the start I feel that the “you” is someone who is separated ...

Hello, I'm Carl, nice to meet you! I really like the entire idea of this poem, reminds me a lot of The Brothers Grimm! Okay, review time. 1st stanza- Wow, ...

For our hearts are as cold as ice that makes us hateful and yet sensual, For we are the fallen enemy who finds passion in your sweet blood, For there ...

Hey :), I actually really liked this :D. I like the rhyme at the start and end especially: There’s a glass wall "myself And I, from A lie," "Where I ...

Great poem, I love the ending :P . I think that you should change it to "Without my brothers i would soon fall" Rather than "have fall", as it should ...

Hello, I enjoyed reading your work, I hope that my review can be of assistance. Firstly, I think that the first paragraph is a little clichéd, it seems in many ...

Very nice :D , although I have a feeling that in the first stanza it should be screams not screems? Also the last line of stanza one, “The trees are ...