MilkNCookies

Haha I love this! Not as much haha... you undertand. I killed cinderella, Capital C for a name. shot her twice in the back. One thing that confuses me is ...

Hey, blue! I was really meaning to comment earlier, I read it a long time ago. I kept saying 'i"ll do it next' and never got to it. xp but, ...

bold is my comments. The man blowing his nose was like a fog horn, shattering the early morning fog in the doctor's office. His hands trembled and his movements jerked, ...

Alright! Well, bold are comments and suggestions. I was at school when it happened. The event that caused the inevitable to happen. A bit better hook, I think. They said ...

Alright, I'm here to review you sheary!(Can I call you that?!?!) My commetns are in bold   LEAVES Dear my little petite leaves, You are born, but only in the ...

Alright, comments are bold. I felt the earth do its job and let me go. The galaxy swallowed me whole. The fog absorbed me. And I fell into oblivion. I ...

OK! So, first review of yours, my bold will be nitpicks. So this is actually kind of a personal memory- something I VERY rarely write. But here it is- I ...

Alright, blue, here I am as promised. Once, Apple reviewed my work and told me that writing was like stitching two cloths together, the closer the stitching, the better the ...

HAHA I love this!t's funny here- comments in bold . 'His fair and smooth skin Dark-brown hair that’s perfect His gracious smile and helpful hands Lends a hand when I ...

Hey! This is good! i like it. Let's see if I can help. Bold is my comments, since you don't need any corrections. Headphones in my ears Background nose, just ...

Bold will be my comments/fixes. Ring, Ring. Italics look better I grabbed my cell phone on my bed, flipped it open and with my, no comma, I think. a cheerful ...

Back again! “Linder, there you are.” I turn at the sound of my name. It’s Thomas, the human in charge of helping new dragons. He’s a young human, sixteen, about ...

Payback for reviewing my story. bold is my reviews and comments. “There girl, hold still, I’m almost done.” I hit the bolt with my hammer, fitting it smoothly with the ...

This was very confusing. The corrections will be in bold. I’m Dragon, and my true adventure started when I was about eighteen. I befriended a girl, and she persuaded me ...

Hm. I beg to differ a bit, crazy. She's depressed because her grandma died, her older brother moved, and her parents started to fight. The other issues just pile onto ...