Milanimo

Just like e.e. cummings, I enjoy the style of no capitalization. This poem was personal, so I felt the lack of capitalization made it feel raw and emotional. Depending on ...

No problem!

Sure! I'd love to!

I would say grammar more than prose. I think of prose more as a paragraph, free-write format where everything is not as standard and formatted. Does that help?

Thanks! And it's fine I never review and I feel bad :/ any review is good long or short! And originally the poem was in stanzas (if that would have ...

Thank you! And your comments were great! I haven't looked at this poem in a while and just never got a chance to post it. I just copied and pasted ...

No problem! and that makes more sense. It was just a weird transition. I didn't know if it was a sleepover of some kind because its like a dream but ...

Yeah it's great!! :)

Thank you! And if I may ask, why the 8.7? Just want to improve my writing!

No problem! I'm sure you'll enjoy it!

Thank you! And those last two lines were supposed to talk about another person who is as lost and alone as the narrator. If it's hard to see from a ...

Haha it's fine! And you don't really need a back story, you might want to put a chapter though where he severely mourns her. Maybe he sits down for a ...

Thank you! And I will keep writing until the day I die so no worried there!

Thank you so much! I'm so happy the words moved you!

Thank you! I listen to bands that do spoken word (ex: La Dispute) and I loved how poetic it sounded so I thought I'd give it a try. I'm really ...