Milanimo

Hi! I don't have much for this poem because it's beautiful! And looking at your posts on the left as I'm typing, it's seems as though you have great experience! ...

Hi! I think this chapter is fairly interesting. It's very well written (especially if English is not your first language). I have a few critiques though: 1. "Revolution" If the ...

Hi! This haiku is very interesting! Your diction is unique, as well. Most people would not have thought to use the word 'marinated'. It definitely set me off on first ...

Hi! Great job! I also agree with the first review that you should put more imagery in the second stanza. Also perhaps you could name your title something a bit ...

Wow! This poem is very different. I'm sure analyzing this poem I could find a very well-thought out, deeper meaning, but from first glance it's still very interesting! "Squiggldy" I ...

Hi! This is easy for a lot of people to relate to, so know that your'e not alone. Just a few corrections: " I need someone to so furiously angry ...

Hello! This is very important for stressed out students toward the end of the year! "an important exam. . So does that mark the end of life?" Is there supposed ...

Hi! You might want to switch up the title. If it's not a haiku, you don't want to tell your readers, otherwise they'll criticize you for not having it in ...

This poem is definitely general. It's prose, bordering on the lines of narrative or something completely filed into the 'other' category. Because many people here don't like to capitalize their ...

Very pretty! The imagery is clear here and the symbolism as well. I don't think you need the two dashes after "late nights". I think the reader can tell you ...

Hi! Here for your first review! First off, very unique poem! It has a very relatable theme for writers and readers alike, and is very greatly expressed. One critique I ...

Hi! Here to get you out of the green room! This is a very nice poem! Very descriptive and the voice is clear and evident. I suggest getting rid of ...

Hi! Might I suggest taking the dashes out of the stanzas? It looks more professional and people can already tell there's a break there. "Those fingers, still rough, soften with ...

This is a great poem! Very emotional and I hope your friend feels better. You don't need to have the dashes where the stanzas are, so feel free to remove ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this piece and how it painted a great picture! Kind of like The Great Gatsby, if you will? Sort of a jazzy feel with a broken ...