Milaita

I understand! :) Thank you very much for the tips and advice!

Also, Katarina was scared because she wasn't expecting him to appear in front of her so quickly and suddenly.

The man isn't a symbol at all, he was a character. His name is Dill. However, he was a man who had been killed prior to the beginning of the ...

I always forget to use commas at the end of dialogue bits. Every time. And it's cut off because class ended just as I got to that point. Poor timing ...

Or, I could fail. make the period just before the ending quotations a comma*. My bad!

Thank you for the comment and the review! I will take the idea into consideration. A P.O.V. from a 4 year old is an interesting idea. :)

Thank you for the comment and the review! :) I will take them into consideration.

Thank you for the comment! :)

The assignment was to write a poem about a dream we've had. Ehm, I know it doesn't flow well, but, I wrote this in under ten minutes, so...

Hm, the first two lines don't match up too well in terms of rhythm.

I will edit and revise. Thanks for the help! :)

Cute. I like it, haha. :)

Yep, spell check, and grammar check. But otherwise, a nice read. I haven't had this warm, fuzzy feeling in awhile. Uh, I dunno. Good job. :)

I am Jataani, and Milaita... Sorry for what confusion may have been noticed...

O.K., I really do not like this one. I am going to do quite a few edits on here in order to attempt to improve it. I agree though, I ...