Mikesly

To me it looked good, but there are some typos.

Hello Mikesly! Welcome to YWS! Well, I do have to agree with Tam, you'll need to edit it to make it look better. I'm not sure what to make of ...

I'm a new member to the website, but I'm not new to writing. I sometimes write my stories in a different way like in between the stars, an action is ...

It's preety cool. About the comet. But I don't understand something. What it's means "The Color Decrease". "The Color Decrease" is the name of the eraser that he wanted to ...

12 year old children get to be exposed to words like "hussy"?

The only things I could think of were some things involving Heaven and... the opposite, and stuff like that. Like when you said a field of liars, made you want ...