Published May 14, 2010
This post has been deleted
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
141,334 Literary Works • 674,350 Reviews
Once again I am late on the draw! I am getting good at this whole late thing...
Well, everybody seems to have everything covered already.
I really actually like Viv's manner of speaking. It's the way I like to speak, although slightly more evil...
Anyways...
Nicely done and I can't wait till scene 7!
I was equally as clueless about "hussy"... I'm not the best at deciding age ratings I'm afraid... except for the obvious extremes! And I don't really write a lot of that kind of material. I apologise for any offensiveness Mikesly, but I really don't think it qualifies for a 16 rating... besides that word, what do you think of the writing?
Thanks for your review once again Tanya! Haha, I don't really need to keep writing, as I wrote the whole play a long time ago, I'm just posting the scenes bit by bit. I guess I can start editing though...
Um, is 'hussy' a bad word? Not where I come from. Hum...
Anyway, Ember, another great chapter! Er, scene. I enjoyed it and I have no nitpicks about it. Vivica is truly evil ... But that's the point, isn't it?
Great work, keep writing!
Tanya
12 year old children get to be exposed to words like "hussy"?