Mike17jones

okay, I understand what you're saying; I never have been that good at grammar. I'll work on it!

Thanks for the good comments and useful feedback!!

Cheers buddy.

I like it a lot. However a truly great poem grips the reader. This was good, but lasted a bit too long. Furthermore, you didn't really explain how the ghost ...

Thanks a lot! Yes, definitely agree with you, new to poetry so I am unfamiliar with the structure, this is why it probably didn't read well.

Thanks a lot! Yes, definitely agree with you, new to poetry so I am unfamiliar with the structure, this is why it probably didn't read well.

Nice ideas, captured my imagination well. However found it hard to read at times, I suggest you find a way to make it run a bit smoother? All in all, ...

Very much like this poem. Captured the beauty of poetry and entwined it with nature successfully to make the reader envisage a scene of immaculate beauty. Well done.

Oh yes, sorry I didn't proof read it before submitting, thank you however.

Thanks a lot for the advice, I see where you're coming from and and agree with you.