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Re: The Ship and the Storm
Holy cow. So as you can probably guess I love this poem, I love the description, and the structure, and how the way it rhymes just helps it roll off ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: A Hardened Heart
I really like this. I like the emotion that is evokes and how it really shows you how the narrator feels. The only things that I would change are possibly ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: Reflections from Gasworks
I love this. I love the comparison to the opera and the conductor dying (or just not showing up). I also love how it really just puts everything out there ...
Oct 24, 2015 -
Re: Ignored
I relate to this more than anyone will ever realize. Like only one maybe two of my friends actually know what I'm talking about and can have intelligent conversations with ...
Oct 21, 2015 -
Re: Hot Tricks
Wow, so I just want to throw out there real quick, you have a really good idea and story line here. I would just recommend that you add some more ...
Oct 21, 2015 -
Re: Speak Your Demons
I love this, I love how it doesn't just talk about external threats, but instead the internal threats. The ones that are within us that no one are there unless ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Ramblings of possible insanity.
Wow, you know you never really see many of these where its telling to be yourself and be strong when its not also telling you that its ok to go ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Mirror
I have to say I really do love this poem. Although yes, as said earlier it could use a little more imagery and symbolism, but I just want to throw ...
Oct 15, 2015
